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Blazie Halloween Icon by Blazeflight1O1 Blazie Halloween Icon by Blazeflight1O1
Something about this doesn't seem right...
Please critique, I need to know what's wrong!

EDIT: Fixed some shading on the face, and deepened the background a little. Will redo the writing soon.
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this is a lovely icon idea :3 and probably better than my own OTL I love blazies face and it really fits for Halloween :D Probably the only think i dont like it the out line color and the orange in the back :/ It would probably have been better to make Blazie stick out more by making a dark background and adding a lighter outline :3
You could have made the icon dark blue and the outline light blue (not to light) so make her pop out more :3
I hope my critique helped and that it wasn't too mean :3
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annabanana9198 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omigod, love this <33
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mahalo <3
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annabanana9198 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
8D
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Psychicstar Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*short/skinny
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Psychicstar Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think everything looks fine! c:
except the ponytail which is a little bit short xDD
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mahalo!
Everyone's been saying that, not sure how to change it orz
It looks bad as my icon orz
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Psychicstar Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks fine in general,just so you know for next time! c:
And I think it looks like an awesome icon! :dummy:
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, mahalo <3
Thanks ^7^
[LS? I'm in a drawing mood but I dunno where to start. Maybe I'll start LC's commission. -Or at least I'll try.-]
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Psychicstar Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xDD
Sure,I was planning on LSing as well (my S-A owner/persona)
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome c:
Link me!
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Psychicstar Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay [link]
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yaaaaay
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ShadowChan1337 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Student General Artist
.........
Excuse me while I make an icon for my UTAU Kei.
OTL
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD
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RaintheFoxCat1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I think it's just the eyes... Too far apart...

The rest is fantastic~
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The eyes are far apart to create a bit of a scary look.
I like irregular = scary. xD
But thanks anyways.

Mahalo ^^
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RaintheFoxCat1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Lol oh :3
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
: B
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Illusion-Kat Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't do formal critiques.
And when I critique, I can get very strict. XD

Anyway, the neck's too long. And the eyes are a little wide apart. And the ponytail's too small.
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay. xD

The neck and eyes are longer/wide apart to make her look more scary. Personally, I think the closer the eyes are together makes her look a little more innocent, and a longer neck reminds me of some horror pictures I've seen... the neck is a little long, the limbs are long, and the torso is skinny, hair is not as full, etc. Thank you for pointing out the ponytail, though.
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Illusion-Kat Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...oh, and use your handwriting while riding on a car. It'll look more natural, stylized, and possible scary, depending on how you do it.
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Blazeflight1O1 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay. Thanks c:
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